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This is inspired by one of my favorite artists --> :iconlinlilian:

I saw her piece titled, "Lost My Music" -->[link]

and i got inspired with the theme, Music. And whats my favorite song? Pachelbel's Canon of course!!! So pretty much, i know Kotomi Ichinose (all props to Key's Clannad) loves to play the violin but sucks horribly, but i thought, what if she can play Pachelbel's canon and play it BEAUTIFULLY!

This is my first time drawing an instrument (i had reference though). So yea, i worked on this pretty much listening to many variations of my favorite song, Canon. And i had lots of fun too!

So yea guys, i hope you like this piece, Cuz i do!!

LEMME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK!!!

Tools: Copic & Prismacolor Markers

Damn, i Jus realized my violin is too wide.... oh well, not bad for a first try i guess o_o'


:star: You can also find this in my club --> :iconkey-visual-arts-club::star:

Critiques


:iconvampirepenguin93:
Very nice work!
I really love how you drew her hair! It has nice flow to it!
and she has a very pleasant expression. One can really tell she loves music!

Now, You did well with drawing the violin, but considering you did a frontal view of the girl, the violin perspective should be angled more.
When playing the violin, the player holds it more upright.
Also, the arm that is holding the violin is well done, but the hand should have more definition to it. Since holding a violin is usually at a slightly odd angle, it's tough to draw, but if you create darker shadows or more lines to define the wrist bending, I think it'll work out nicely!

And overall nice work!
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:iconj-char06121986:
How lovely!

--
I am rocking and/or lounging the Casbah, locking the cashbox, and stopping the cat box all at once.

Bwahahahaha!!! I am not Raditz!!!
:iconj-char06121986:
Sure is!

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I am rocking and/or lounging the Casbah, locking the cashbox, and stopping the cat box all at once.

Bwahahahaha!!! I am not Raditz!!!
:iconperfectstriker:
Looks very nice :D Better than anything I could make, that's for sure ^^;
:iconlinlilian:
It turned out really nice! I like how serene she looks ^_^ Good job!
:iconlon3lyaznikka:
all thanks to you :3
:iconlon3lyaznikka:
you'll get there, jus keep workin hard.
:iconohhmydeer:
wow thats an awesome pic
u deserve more comments on it!!
i really like her hair and the violin came out really nicely!!!
and her expression is soo calm--love it XD

--
you were so present
like the snow on the ground
now you're past
like the water slipping away
i am neither snow nor water
for the present can't keep me
and the past always had you

(omd)
:iconlon3lyaznikka:
yea, ppl tend to not really care for traditionally drawn things anymore, its all bout digital nowadays :( but yea, i really appreciate your comment! least that makes me feel better :3
:iconohhmydeer:
same here!! i love traditional because its all by hand, digital is too confusing..lol. but seriously, ur pic is really really good! i cant believe its prismas and copics! i envy ur mad skills. haha.

and ur SOO welcome XD

--
you were so present
like the snow on the ground
now you're past
like the water slipping away
i am neither snow nor water
for the present can't keep me
and the past always had you

(omd)

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